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http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u208/knup32111/toyota-ft-hs-concept-6-37267.jpg

if you look at this angle and relate it to a side view, it really does look like it
cmon, even the break for the side window glass is in the same spot

the only differences are:
yours has simplified back
yours has an exta side scoop (while eliminating the upper one)
yours has an extended front vent
and yours has a windshield that carries to the back

the similarities are undenyable though
good, but the lag is almost unbearable
i said 10 minute project in frustrasion, of course it sucks
dont forget to add the shadings on top
@ roman - because i felt like it
more shadings please! :tup:
so you can see how there isnt actually a massive hole :yum:
understandable mistake

@ sanderwezep - actually the shading doesnt (fully) show the true shape of the car. But it is good shading anyways
the vehicle itself looks fine, until the back window
it just doesnt look right
well, remember that some people dont know there cars very well.
unlike people like me, who can tell you most cars that drive by
dare, while you wanted to see it, under ground was drooling over it
somehow i think under ground is more exited;)
and next you can shoot feet........
the method for geting the spent shell out is less than streamlined...
tracing is generally nice, but coloration of some bits is off
i especially like the wheels of course
what is the point of having hollow point ammo if it doesnt have the effect of real hollow tips?
Last edited at 2010/05/08 20:00:35 by sheepborg
ahhh, much better! even if it forgets 2 parts
cant wait for the magazine because this is a pain to reload

is the giant glob out in front of the bullet necessary?
i prefer to have the killer at the end of the gun in the barrel (like in my sequence gun)
i would prefer to layer the shadings, rather than the way you did it.
mainly because your way has little overlaps that ruin the effect of the shadings a bit
dang
next time, seperate long comments into little paragraphs; it is easier to read that way

anyways, through your conveluted and twisted uber-long comment i think you said that you would make the killer at the end of the barrel and you will fix the forgeting

another suggestion i forgot was that if you, instead of having each bullet with a movable killer in it to fire, just make the firing pin do the killing to make the gun fire it would work better

interestingly though, your bullet design is more like a selfcontained gun. and your 'gun' is more of a holder for it
probably good for wire frame 3d, but that would be very complex
hmmmm...
i should hope it has power.
60 strength springs
pistons that weigh as much as the body
visually it is very pleasing! all the light just makes it look great

the un-appealing visual part would be the axel and the shocks. they look so fake.
plus the axel is in front of the wheels....

i would look at my suspension with the panhard rod and implement that. also look at my front view rock crawler and pay attention to the axels.
i suggest also adding a back axel. 10/10 for looks 4/10 for working

more comment to come later
Last edited at 2010/05/09 19:22:45 by sheepborg
much better shadings!
are the wheels the right size?
Last edited at 2010/05/10 03:12:41 by sheepborg
i was just saying that common sense suggests that it should go fast
that almost sounded like you dont like the advice...
nah, you love advice and critique

perhaps you could make an offroad version of this to redeem yourself mechanically. that would be cool!
before you do that i suggest studying up on pictures of suspensions, so you can get it as good as possible.
Last edited at 2010/05/10 03:46:44 by sheepborg
you should slant the back of the gun so the casing is more likely to go out
also tighten the thing that holds the ammo
by doing these things it doesnt jam as much
the grill bits are obsessive dont you think...
if you hold the brakes and accelarate it slides:P
use less textures, so it will lag less and have a smaller file size
suspension is pretty bad

2 suggestions
either make the suspension bars connect to the car connect below the hinge to the wheel(so it doesnt go down when you brake) od have a slider in the front and a bar in the back
also the longer the suspension bar the merrier

i like the wheels too ;)
very impressive!
i like it very much, especially since it is not possible for it to reverse itself
right after project goat is completed
as in lethalsquirl's and my colab 1970 GTO

as of now there is a teaser in the scenes section of the forum
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