if you look at this angle and relate it to a side view, it really does look like it
cmon, even the break for the side window glass is in the same spot
the only differences are:
yours has simplified back
yours has an exta side scoop (while eliminating the upper one)
yours has an extended front vent
and yours has a windshield that carries to the back
i would prefer to layer the shadings, rather than the way you did it.
mainly because your way has little overlaps that ruin the effect of the shadings a bit
dang
next time, seperate long comments into little paragraphs; it is easier to read that way
anyways, through your conveluted and twisted uber-long comment i think you said that you would make the killer at the end of the barrel and you will fix the forgeting
another suggestion i forgot was that if you, instead of having each bullet with a movable killer in it to fire, just make the firing pin do the killing to make the gun fire it would work better
interestingly though, your bullet design is more like a selfcontained gun. and your 'gun' is more of a holder for it
visually it is very pleasing! all the light just makes it look great
the un-appealing visual part would be the axel and the shocks. they look so fake.
plus the axel is in front of the wheels....
i would look at my suspension with the panhard rod and implement that. also look at my front view rock crawler and pay attention to the axels.
i suggest also adding a back axel. 10/10 for looks 4/10 for working
that almost sounded like you dont like the advice...
nah, you love advice and critique
perhaps you could make an offroad version of this to redeem yourself mechanically. that would be cool!
before you do that i suggest studying up on pictures of suspensions, so you can get it as good as possible.
you should slant the back of the gun so the casing is more likely to go out
also tighten the thing that holds the ammo
by doing these things it doesnt jam as much
2 suggestions
either make the suspension bars connect to the car connect below the hinge to the wheel(so it doesnt go down when you brake) od have a slider in the front and a bar in the back
also the longer the suspension bar the merrier